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by: Ezaz | Complete Story | Last updated Apr 26, 2014

Chapter 1 added Apr 25, 2014 Chapter 1 added Apr 26, 2014 Chapter 2 added Apr 26, 2014 Chapter 3 added Apr 26, 2014
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James and his sister finish their transformation ray. P.S this is my first story so....yes make fun of me and tell me anything i should change p.s.s Love you

Chapter 1
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So this is my very first story and I need constructive criticism. Also I want to say thanks for just clicking on this story.

I tried to capture the image of siblings who hate and love each other at the same time... Let me know in the reviews if i delivered.

Love you <3

 

 

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Wait.....what?

by: Ezaz | Complete Story | Last updated Apr 26, 2014

Chapter 1 added Apr 25, 2014 Chapter 1 added Apr 26, 2014 Chapter 2 added Apr 26, 2014 Chapter 3 added Apr 26, 2014

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