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On story: Arrivals in the Maternity Ward - chapter 9

Alasnegras Mar 16, 2025

This is by far the ending that surprised me the most. The way of elaborating it is perfect considering the theme, which could easily get into th ...

On story: Arrivals in the Maternity Ward - chapter 8

Alasnegras Mar 16, 2025

It was clear that Luna wasn't going to let Dylan disappear just like that. Poor Stan, he had barely regained his adulthood and in an instant he ...

Precious

On story: Arrivals in the Maternity Ward - chapter 7
Alasnegras Mar 8, 2025

A beauty from beginning to end. You manage to convey so well the charm of those first few months of development. One might think it's sad to see ...

On story: Arrivals in the Maternity Ward - chapter 6

Alasnegras Mar 8, 2025

The most predictable ending, but no less enjoyable for that. I do have to say that the way Maria decides to communicate her decision feels a bit ...

Honest review 4

On story: Arrivals in the Maternity Ward - chapter 4
Alasnegras Feb 21, 2025

Aaaand… we’ve reached the final part. It’s been a great journey—very exciting. I can’t wait to see all the endings you have prepared f ...

Honest review 3

On story: Arrivals in the Maternity Ward - chapter 3
Alasnegras Feb 21, 2025

The character development feels very natural; my favorite is definitely Robot Nurse Luna. Maria acts just as I would expect a newly postpartum m ...

Honest review 2

On story: Arrivals in the Maternity Ward - chapter 2
Alasnegras Feb 21, 2025

The story is so good that it deserves more than one comment, so I'm going to leave something in each part. Here, I loved the medical check-up— ...

Honest review

On story: Arrivals in the Maternity Ward - chapter 1
Alasnegras Feb 20, 2025

I had been waiting for a story like this for a long time. I find everything you’ve built very interesting—it’s clear that you’ve put tim ...