Sometimes They Are Macabre

by: AutoXgirl | Complete Story | Last updated Sep 27, 2008


The Continuous Story from 2003 has returned with new chapters to be added.


Chapter 1
Chapter 1


Chapter Description: The following chapter/part was originally written by Louder and was posted February 17, 2003.


SOMETIMES THEY ARE MACABRE

By AutoXgirl

Chapter 1

The following chapter/part was originally written by Louder and was posted February 17, 2003. The chapter is presented exactly as it was first posted with the possible exception of corrections to errors found during the reposting of this chapter.

Our story begins with 39 year old Marcia. A housewife and mother who is fighting a losing battle with time.

She wanted to look and feel younger and was pushing herself to achieve that end thru hard work and dieting. But on this morning she stumbled into a shortcut.

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The ARSA Continuous Story Feb 2003 Part 1 Louder

Marcia was feeling worn down. Her 39 year old body was catching up to her quickly. Even though she tried to remain fit, her body was losing its definition. She was beginning to dread looking in the mirror each morning.

Dull, lifeless brown hair threatening to turn gray and wrinkles that seemed to multiply overnight would greet her.

She knew she needed to work harder on a workout routine and watch her diet but it seemed to get harder every time she tried to do just that.

She knew she was going to have to push herself harder than ever. She didn’t want to end up looking like her mother!

Marcia did her morning power-walk and pushed herself harder and harder. She had already went farther than she had in years. She was out of breath and she could feel her joints aching. She’d pushed it too far and still had to get back home yet!

Looking ahead, she saw a small shop that she’d never noticed before. Needing a break, she ducked in and grabbed her knees while trying to catch her breath.

The air conditioning felt good. She wiped her brow and glanced around the room.

“Howdy do, ma’am!” a cheerful man said as he heard the door buzzer when she entered. “What can I do ya for?”

“Oh...” she puffed, “I’m just catching my breath. Trying to keep in shape and I kind of over-done things this morning.”

“Welllllllll I think I’ve got just the thing for you!” he told her.

Marcia realized this man must be a salesman thru and thru. Way more cheerful than he needs to be and ready to pounce even though she was obviously not in the buying mood.

“I’m afraid I’m not interested in anything this morning. Sorry to get your hopes up. I just needed to catch my breath and cool off. I didn’t even know your shop was here” she said as she looked around. “Ummmm just what is it you sell here?”

“Dreams! I sell dreams!” he said as his arms flung out in emphasis.

“Oh... I see... “ Marcia replied pretending to understand.

“Ma’am, pardon me for saying, but your’s appears to be a simple one. You’re killing yourself trying to get into shape. How could that be enjoyable?” he asked.

“Obviously it’s not, but at my age I do what I can.”

“I see...” he replied while shaking his head. “I think what you want is right inside here!”

The man pointed to a doorway covered by a curtain.

“Oh... Seriously... I’m not looking to buy anything... “ she said but was cut off.

“Buy? Who said anything about ?buying?’ We can talk about that later. Why don’t you just step inside to see what awaits!” he told her.

Marcia shrugged. What could it hurt she figured?

“Now that’s the spirit! I could tell when I saw you what your dream was. It’s right in here,” he said as he pulled the curtain back revealing a wooden door. “Guaranteed to put a spring back in your step... or skip... or crawl... “

“And just what is it?” she asked curiously as she entered the darkened room. “I could certainly use a little spring in my step.”

The man did not follow her.

“Ummmm it’s kind of dark in here.... “ she said as she felt a chill. “What is it I am looking for in here?”

“Your dream! To be young again!” the man said as he closed the door behind her. “It’s already started.... about a year a minute! Aren’t you thrilled?”

Marcia had figured the man for a harmless salesman but now he seemed more like a lunatic. She turned for the door but it was locked. “Hey!!! Let me out!” she yelled as she banged on the door.

“Not before I make your dream come true,” the man answered.

“Oh come on. I don’t have time for this!” she said and noticed something strange. Her voice sounded different. Not a lot...maybe clearer...maybe higher.... Maybe it was the acoustics of the room, she wondered?

She looked at her watch. It had been 15 minutes. It was hard to see in the dim light but while looking at her watch she noticed her hand. It looked wrong somehow. Did her hand look different? Younger? That’s crazy.

“Listen... long enough... you’re starting to scare me... Let me out or I’ll scream!” Marcia threatened and heard the door unlock.

“I didn’t mean to scare you,” the man said.

To be continued

 


 

End Chapter 1

Sometimes They Are Macabre

by: AutoXgirl | Complete Story | Last updated Sep 27, 2008

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