The Rival

by: Dreamtales | Complete Story | Last updated Jun 11, 2005


Chapter 4
Chapter 4 - The Conclusion


Chapter Description: Suzy has gotten even younger! What will she do? SHe is under her rival's control.


After Tom returned from his office, he and Monique had a nice intimate dinner together in her elegant dining room, while baby Suzy took a nap in her new crib out in the living room. Monique had been mulling over the extraordinary events of the day, and had become convinced that the youth ray Tom had invented was a potential gold mine. Suzy’s transformation had proved for the first time that it actually worked on people! Always the businesswoman, Monique immediately focused on the profit angle.

"Just think of it, Tom! It’s the fountain of youth! Just consider how much money people shell out to help themselves look young - plastic surgery, hair implants, liposuction, drugs and diets - and none of it actually works! Here we can offer the real thing, actually make people younger! The possibilities are unlimited! We can charge them whatever we want - if they know it really works they’ll pay anything, and be happy to get it!"

Monique sat up, really getting into her vision of YouthGene’s market potential. "Think what this means for the public offering - our stock is going to skyrocket! YouthGene is going to be the next Microsoft - or bigger! I mean, what a concept! If fund managers are willing to pay big bucks to invest in another look alike fried chicken franchising company, just imagine what kind of market multiple this will get!" Monique paused for dramatic effect, lowering her voice to a whisper. "We’re talking billions here, Tom! This is the kind of opportunity that comes along once in a century! This is what dynasties are made of!!"

Tom found it hard to get excited about money, as he had other things on his mind. Monique had spiked the wine - Tom’s favorite Cabernet Sauvignon - with the antidote, and she was amused to see Tom downing several glasses during the meal. While the redheaded venture capitalist excitedly outlined her vision for YouthGene, Tom seemed to become increasingly quiet and withdrawn as the dinner progressed. Finally, Tom ended up just sitting and staring at Monique with his mouth open, while his gaze appeared to be focused on her deep cleavage peeking out over the table top. Monique wasn’t sure, but she thought she caught Tom drooling at one point.

Seeing she had lost her audience (at least for what she was saying) Monique brought the discussion to a close. "Well, think it over, Tom, and we’ll talk about it again tomorrow." Monique smiled, getting up from the table and coming to take Tom’s hand in hers. "I’m so glad you could stay for dinner. It’s really been a lovely evening! Why don’t we go into the living room and check on our little baby?" Tom grunted a response, and stood up in a daze and followed her obediently into the living room, dragging behind her as he continued to stare open mouthed at Monique’s lush body.

Inside her crib, baby Suzy had just awakened. She was lying on her back, peering out of the bars when suddenly a huge smiling face appeared outside. She was startled at seeing her rival suddenly loom before her, and twitched her little arms and legs excitedly.

"Well, well, look who’s up!" smiled Monique, leaning over and looking into the crib. "Now Suzy, it’s getting late and it’s time for us to say goodnight to uncle Tommy!"

"Let’s both give uncle Tommy a goodnight kiss! Me first!" giggled Monique, as she turned towards Tom and threw her arms around him. The kiss was full on the mouth and Monique really got into it, grinding her sexy hips against Tom and pushing her ample breasts against his chest, aware that her shrunken rival was helplessly watching from her crib. Tom’s response was to stand stiffly with a glazed expression on his face - the aphrodisiac had stimulated him so much he was almost catatonic!

"Waaa! Waaa!" cried little Suzy, incensed at seeing her big rival kiss her man in front of her.

"Oh, I’m sorry!" laughed Monique, "I’m not being a good hostess! Here, Suzy - you should have a chance to kiss uncle Tommy, too! After all, it’s only fair!"

Monique plucked the shocked little infant from her crib and placed her in Tom’s arms, where she reached up and tried to touch his face with her little baby hands. With Monique finally helping to lift her up, she was able to crawl up high enough to plant an awkward drooly kiss on Tom’s cheek.

"Very good, Suzy!" laughed Monique, picking her up and setting the tiny tot back in her crib. Then she turned her attention back to comatose Tom, running her fingers through his hair and asking in a breathy voce, "Now tell me Tom, which kiss did you like better?" Tom for his part continued to stare at Monique, eyes unfocused, having stopped talking or moving since Monique’s sultry smooch.

"Hmmm..." she said, hands on sexy hips and looking thoughtfully at the little innocent baby in her diapers scowling at her from the crib. "I don’t think this little kissing contest is quite fair!" Monique turned facing Tom and leaned on the crib so that she and Suzy were lined up side by side, her lush mature body in her clinging silk shift towering over the tiny diaper clad infant. "What do you think, Tom? Each of us had a chance to kiss you, but it seems to me that for some reason it’s not quite an even comparison. But I can’t quite put my finger on why!"

Suddenly, Monique smiled and said "I’ve got it!" To the amazement of Tom and baby Suzy, the sultry redhead started undressing, first unzipping her dress and letting it fall to the floor in a silky puddle beneath her long sexy legs, then unhooking her sexy lace bra! In the matter of a few seconds, she was stark naked save for her black lace undies! Monique turned her voluptuous nude body toward the shocked little infant and leaned over her crib, smiling sweetly and shaking her big finger at little Suzy, "Shame on you, Suzy - you almost pulled a fast one! After all, you got a chance to kiss Tom wearing only your little diapers, while I had my whole dress on!" Then she wrapped her lush naked body against Tom, pressing her big breasts with her hard nipples against him, and grinned down at tiny Suzy. "Fair is fair!" she giggled.

The effect on Tom was electric! Groaning and panting, he came alive with passion, kissing her first on the mouth and then all over her voluptuous body, his hands desperately groping her luscious ass and sexy breasts. Monique, still strongly affected by the powerful aphrodisiac (and having had a few extra glasses of wine herself), was also in ecstasy. "Oh, Tom!" she gushed, "All this talk of babies is getting me so excited! Mmmmm... let’s go and make our own babies!"

Finally, consumed by an animal lust, Tom picked up Monique and carried her off to her bedroom. Suzy, sitting in her crib, watched helplessly as her adult lover walked out of the room carrying her hated rival, the sexy redhead’s head and legs sticking out on either side of his broad shoulders. As the pair went out the doorway, Monique winked at baby Suzy and blew her a little kiss goodnight.

For the next hour baby Suzy was treated to what seemed like a continuing series of lusty groans and piercing screams emanating from the bedroom. She couldn’t count very well any more, but it seemed to her that the two grown-ups had enough crescendos of passion to use up all the fingers in her one hand! She was fuming, forced to sit helplessly in her crib while the two adults were off in the other room. She wasn’t quite sure if they were having fun (it kind of sounded scary, she thought), but she was very jealous at being excluded from whatever it was they were doing! And it sure was noisy!

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Baby Suzy was just drifting off to sleep when a figure appeared in the doorway. It was Monique, coming out of her bedroom to check on her little shrunken rival.

Suzy had never seen Monique looking like this before! Her beautiful red hair, normally picture perfect, was in a wild tangle, her skimpy black lace lingerie torn in several places, and it seemed like the big lady was walking gingerly, almost limping - maybe she had stubbed her toe? But most surprising was the sexy redhead’s expression. In place of her ubiquitous cold intelligent smile, plastered across her beautiful face was a goofy lopsided grin!

A flash of light threw shadows on the wall, then vanished, followed by a funny smell. Monique was smoking a cigarette, one of her rare vices reserved for special occasions. Seeing the little tot still awake, the sexy redhead sauntered over, taking a big drag of her cigarette, and blowing the smoke away from the crib. "Care for a smoke, Suzy?" giggled Monique, offering the pack, then hesitating and laughing. "On second thought, you’d better not - it’ll probably stunt your growth!"

Monique smiled down at baby Suzy, who’s little round face was glaring out at her from the crib. "Yeah, I just though I’d come out so the two of us could have a little, uh, woman to woman talk before bed." Monique stood leaning on the crib and staring off dreamily into space, savoring the delicious feeling following her intense lovemaking. "Mmmm... y’know that Tom of yours is really quite an amazing fuck! It was just incredible! Don’t you just love how it feels when he..." Suddenly Monique stopped and regarded her shrunken rival, her little innocent face looking up angrily, "Oh, I’m sorry. I guess you don’t know how it feels! Silly me! I guess I’ll have to wait another... oh, eighteen years or so! Then we can talk about it!"

"Hmmm..." said Monique langourously, regarding her ripped lace nightie, "Looks like this nightgown has seen better days!" She turned and stubbed out her cigarette. "Actually, It’s still awfully warm in here, don’t you think? I guess I really don’t need it!" Monique quickly shrugged off the nightie, suddenly standing stark naked before the shocked little tot.

Monique yawned and luxuriantly stretched her ravishing nude body. "Ohhhmmmm... I think we’ve both had a very long day! Like I always say, there’s nothing like a really good passionate lovemaking session to tire you out! And I’m sure that waving that little baby rattle of yours must be just exhausting, too! So it’s beddy-bye time for both of us!" Monique then walked right up against the crib and lowered the bars in front, leaning forward so that her huge bare breasts were spilling into the crib and looming up right in front of her tiny rival. "Here, honey, why don’t you give mommie Monique a nice big hug goodnight!"

Baby Suzy was furious. Here her huge adult rival had just finished spending over an hour with her boyfriend in her bedroom, and then had the nerve to come and gloat about her conquest right in front of her! And then to further humiliate her by showing off her voluptuous body while Suzy was still helplessly shrunk to a baby and stuck in her crib! The raging infant started crying and swinging her little baby fists, hitting Monique on her huge perfect breasts, in a frantic attempt to hurt the big nasty lady that was teasing her and stealing her boyfriend!

Monique laughed as the tiny hands bounced off of her. Far from hurting her, the little taps began to arouse her, making her nipples grow hard as she leaned over the cranky little infant and put her arms around her. At first Suzy reacted by swinging harder, but then her baby instincts took over and she slowly started to calm down, focusing her attention on Monique’s huge mammaries. As the little infant became more engrossed, she began first slapping the big sexy breasts with her open palms, progressively slowing down and finally touching them curiously with her little fingers, her little innocent eyes open wide and fixed on the beautiful big breasts and nipples looming before her.

"That’s a good girl!" cooed Monique, giggling at the mesmerizing effect her voluptuous body was having on her little helpless quarry. "Suzy’s not a big girl anymore! Now she’s just a little baby! And baby likes mommie Monique, doesn’t she? Go ahead, little baby, mommie Monique will take good care of you!"

Little Suzy was waging an intense internal struggle. On the one hand, the part of her that remembered being an adult hated her big sexy rival more than anything in the world. She knew that Monique was teasing her, taking advantage of her shrunken, helpless state to utterly humiliate her by forcing her to nurse Monique’s breasts - those same perfect breasts she always hated so much when they were both rivals for Tom! Gathering all her strength, she desperately vowed never to give Monique the satisfaction of seeing her reduced to helplessly suckling those hated perfect breasts!

But Monique was right - Suzy had really become a baby, and was struggling against her baby instincts, now almost overwhelming, that drew her to Monique as an irresistibly attractive maternal figure. As Suzy fondled the enormous breasts before her, and desperately fought against her urge to nurse them, she knew that her hated rival was toying with her, totally in control, and thoroughly enjoying the little game of cat and mouse.

Monique was smiling down at Suzy’s pitiful struggle, watching the tiny baby’s internal conflict with amusement, as it moved towards its inevitable conclusion. The sultry redhead gigged as she felt Suzy’s tiny fingers caress her large breasts and erect nipples, and whispered teasingly to the tiny confused infant. "Where’s your Mommie, Suzy? Look! She’s right here! Yes, little baby! Here’s Mommie Monique! Monique is your Mommie!"

With one last wide eyed helpless look up at her rival’s huge smiling face, baby Suzy surrendered and began sucking on Monique’s huge breast. Monique was surprised at how quickly her milk came - obviously yet another interesting side effect of the antidote! The sexy redhead stood there nursing her tiny quarry, savoring the feeling of complete power over the little helpless creature. She reflected on how it was just yesterday when they had met in the ladies’ room, where Suzy had warned her away from Tom, and had even called her names! She remembered how rude and arrogant Suzy had been - but look at her now, reduced to a tiny helpless infant, suckling at her breast! And to think that the little fool had actually done this to herself! It was almost too perfect to be true!

Monique held little Suzy her in her arms until the tiny infant finally dozed off, then gently placed her back in her crib. For a minute the sexy redhead stood silently, watching over her helpless rival innocently sleeping, then, giggling, she reached out and spun the little toy mobile hanging over baby Suzy before turning out the lights and climbing back into bed with Tom.

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At breakfast, Monique was not in a good mood. First, upon awakening, she had found that all of her expensive designer outfits were now too small for her - that stupid antidote had caused her to grow overnight! She estimated she was about 3 inches taller now, and her breasts were now at least two sizes bigger! She’d have to start clothes shopping all over again!

Then, as if it wasn’t bad enough to have to cram herself into a too-tight dress and look like an oversexed Hollywood bimbo, Tom was having second thoughts about the stock listing! Maybe the guy was a genius entrepreneur and a brilliant inventor, but he was definitely lacking in business sense!

"How can you even consider delaying the stock listing?" asked Monique incredulously, "I really don’t understand!"

"Look, Monique. It’s only prudent to wait until Suzy grows back before we do the rights issue. We can’t go out to investors until we’re sure there are no side effects!"

"But that could take weeks! Months! Someone else could come along and take our concept in the meantime! We can’t afford to wait - think of the amount of money involved!"

"But that’s just it!" sighed Tom, "I don’t need the money - neither do you! We’ve each got more than enough money already to last the rest of our lives! This is a matter of principle! I refuse to be rushed into this!"

"Tom, I really think you’re blowing this way out of proportion! I mean, I know Suzy’s quite small and physically immature now, but its not like she acting any differently than an adult would under the circumstances." Suzy had been sitting at her high chair, burbling and happily waving her arms, completely oblivious to the conversation, while Fredrica fed her mashed carrots. Monique sauntered over to the tiny tot and, lifting her out of her chair and holding her in her arms, continued stating her case. "See, Tom. Look at her - she seems perfectly normal to me! Other than being shrunk to the size of a baby, I’m sure she’s a perfectly healthy adult, on a psychological and emotional level."

"Right, Suzy?" smiled Monique. Suzy reacted by reaching out for Monique’s huge breasts which were towering over her, and trying to put her open mouth over the big nipples that were threatening to burst Monique’s dress. She remembered her feeding last night, and was very excited to see how much bigger mommie Monique had become!

"Er, Suzy! What are you doing?" Monique tried to shift Suzy’s little head away from her breasts, but the tiny tot struggled mightily. "Hey, quit that!" Monique carried the squirming tot back to the high chair and set down little Suzy, who promptly burst into tears, bawling at the top of her lungs and reaching out frantically for the sexy redhead’s stupendous mammaries!

"Fredrica, would you mind getting her out of here? We’re trying to hold a conversation!" huffed Monique, as she picked up a napkin and tried to wipe the baby drool off her dress. While the maid carried the little wailing infant out of the room, Monique turned back to Tom. "OK, maybe she is a bit immature, but I’m sure its temporary. No reason to hold up the stock listing."

"Monique, don’t be ridiculous! The only reason to go forward now is money, and you and I both know it! I just don’t think it the right thing to do!"

Monique was livid, arguing her case, but Tom steadfastly refused to consider letting YouthGene go public until baby Suzy was completely normal and tested. After an extended argument, Monique finally relented, and agreed to accompany Tom to YouthGene to get more of the antidote for baby Suzy. She left her shrunken rival with Fredrica and the other servants as the two adults set out for the office.

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Baby Suzy was playing happily in her crib, waving her rattle, when suddenly the huge adult form of Monique loomed over her. The redhead was once again perfectly coifed, her generous curves barely contained by her dark blue power suit she used for important business dealings. The tiny tot stopped playing and looked up in wide eyed wonder at her big mature rival.

"Hi sweety! Your mommie Monique is just back from work, and she has a big surprise for you." the sultry redhead smiled brightly down at baby Suzy, unsure if the tiny infant could understand her at all any more. "But first, we need to have another little talk."

"I got to thinking, Suzy, I felt bad about last night. It wasn’t sporting of me to take advantage of the situation that way, seducing Tom and everything. Anyway, I just wanted to let you know that I’ve decided Tom is really not my type - he’s too goody-goody, too much of an idealist. I always like my guys to be more practical, with a bit of the killer instinct!" she stopped and reflected, "Actually, I never really liked him at all! It wasn’t until you confronted me in the ladies room the other night that I even considered going after him. I never would have thought of it otherwise. Like I said, I love a challenge," Monique leaned over the crib, her huge smiling sophisticated face inches from baby Suzy’s, "although in this case it was like taking candy from a baby!"

"Anyway, I know you feel strongly about him so I want you to know I won’t stand in your way! After all, I feel you two really deserve each other!" Monique reached down to the floor and picked up a little bundle, holding it up to baby Suzy to see. It was another baby - about the same age as little Suzy! The tiny infant babbled and cooed, blinking its eyes at baby Suzy.

"Tom, meet Suzy! Suzy, Tom!" laughed Monique. "And now I’ll leave you two lovebirds alone, I’m sure you’ve got a lot to talk about - assuming you could talk, that is!"

Fredrica appeared at the door, "Ma’am, it’s the office. You have a call from Tokyo."

"Bye bye, my little cuties!" smiled Monique as she picked up the phone and left the room. "Mommie has to go off to work! She’s so very, very busy now with her new job as president of YouthGene!"

 


 

End Chapter 4

The Rival

by: Dreamtales | Complete Story | Last updated Jun 11, 2005

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